haiku – March gloaming

sunset’s wild approach
clouds’ torsos are beaten red
then turn a bruised gray

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© Gregory V Driscoll  2013

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2 responses to “haiku – March gloaming

  1. Oh my.
    You write the most visual haikus.
    Inspiration, tenfold. 🙂

  2. I’m visibly reddened by your compliment. Thanks…

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