tanka – topsy-turvy

inner world  probing
outer world  ordered seasons
but now all is changed
Nature rebels at our touch
our minds   slaves to bottom lines

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© Gregory V Driscoll  2013

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2 responses to “tanka – topsy-turvy

  1. Awesome Tanka. You’re a pretty fantastic writer.

  2. I’m at a loss for the right words…I’ll just say, Thank you!

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