small white dinghy drifts
across the cloudless night sky
waxing crescent moon
* * *
© Gregory V Driscoll 2013
I can almost see what you’ve written!
I recently discovered the joys of a Haiku, but I can’t seem to stick to the under 17 syllables criteria 😦
Please check out my first attempt at Haiku on WordPress- http://monarathour.wordpress.com/2013/04/17/barista/
Appreciate your opinions on it.
I feel honored that you would ask my opinion on haiku; I’ll take a look and leave my comments — but it may not be today. Thanks for visiting my blog.
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