small white dinghy drifts
across the cloudless night sky
waxing crescent moon

*    *    *

© Gregory V Driscoll  2013


3 responses to “haiku

  1. I can almost see what you’ve written!
    I recently discovered the joys of a Haiku, but I can’t seem to stick to the under 17 syllables criteria 😦
    Please check out my first attempt at Haiku on WordPress- http://monarathour.wordpress.com/2013/04/17/barista/
    Appreciate your opinions on it.

  2. I feel honored that you would ask my opinion on haiku; I’ll take a look and leave my comments — but it may not be today. Thanks for visiting my blog.

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