early morning ferry song

oh hidden song of my soul
through my purple days
through my golden nights
I sing you    can you hear me
across the distance and the hours
can you hear my loneliness
singing aloud your precious name
the sound flashes on the water
as the sun is born once more

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© Gregory V Driscoll  2014

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3 responses to “early morning ferry song

  1. Wow, Just wow, I am stunned. I loved it. Very nicely written. Your choice of words and the flow were both nicely done as well as the strucutre. Amazing Job. Keep up the outstanding work.

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